Sunday, October 18, 2015

love’s commitment


quietly we sit side by side

back and forth we rock while staring

into the mirror of lapsing time

arms around each other much like

identical twins conjoined at birth

as we embrace we look at our reflection

into each other’s face that stare back at us

now with folds on our cheek and brow

our smiles evince of dignity amidst the grey

 on the edges of my hair line and on

hers still with the same flowing beauty

she has displayed all along always next to me

so quickly through time we’ve traveled as

both mothers, a brother too young and a 'pup' our

child recently departed leave us with their memory

and still within us we breathe their breath

we reflect upon our journey hand in hand

with a promise to each other made so many

moons and suns before, to be apart nevermore

13 comments:

  1. A sweet reflection on a long life shared...

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  2. What a lovely poem...I can feel the love and the commitment very strongly.

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  3. It is so wonderful to have a loving companion to share and weather those losses with you. I love that you find her still as lovely. As, indeed, she is. A beautiful poem, my friend. Thinking of you and your wife, and the recent loss of your fur-pup. I imagine the other fur-pup misses him, too.

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  4. When love has grown into a symbiosis it cannot be much stronger... love the image of you as twins...

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  5. How beautifully you express that special bonding of love.

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  6. Beautifully built like a wedding, this union side by side, face to face and breath to breath, until death do we ...

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  7. Great memory/reality to share and live by. Lovely poem.

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