in the
dawn bluebirds sing
and
the rain filled clouds afford
the
day a full display of their
magic
colored scarves with
the
helping fingers of the sun
i know
somewhere for some
this
rainbow is not within view
but
only the dark clouds and storms
and for
them no bluebirds can be
heard,
no dawning of a dream
i can only
hope that the universe in its
chaos
and tumult will bring balance
so that
those in the dark will lay their heads
to sleep
and someday they’ll awaken
to
songbirds, witness a rainbow in the light
of
dawn giving rest to the storm
I think there is a certain balance to the universe. When I am having a bad day you may be having a good day, and vice versa. And hopefully through that we can help each other out. But there is something deeper as well - and injustice and inequality much greater with poverty, pain, war - but hopefully that too leads us to helping each other out - and not just ginoring it because it does not effect us.
ReplyDeleteHmm. I like the imagery, especially that of the rainbow as a magic colored scarf! As for balance, I think there is. Can't see rainbows everywhere at the same time. It rains longer in some places. :)
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Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
May the helping fingers of the sun fling away the darkness and bring a bright smile to one and all...a beautiful prayer...
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nature indeed displays moments of amazing harmony and balance.too bad we dont always get to emulate that in our lives.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful wish.......I love the whole idea of bluebirds in the dawn!
ReplyDeletei thought this was a sweet and hopeful piece. well done. i'd love to wake up to bluebirds on my room's windowsill. that would be a fairy-tale come true!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! Loved the beautiful images in this piece :)
ReplyDeleteI always love the way you bring nature to life in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteYour third stanza really warms my heart.
ReplyDeleteI specially like the hope & light in the ending stanza ~ Wishing you good week ~
ReplyDeleteI do hope you will find some time to make some visits to others who have visited you this week. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful images your hopeful heart creates!
ReplyDeleteI love the play with the song lyrics..i hope too for a brighter day..for all
ReplyDeleteOh I do adore this poem...there is peace here, compassion, kindness and solace. Your prayer to the Universe is so beautiful....I especially loved the first stanza that took my breath away...
ReplyDelete'and the rain filled clouds afford
the day a full display of their
magic colored scarves with
the helping fingers of the sun'
A wonderful piece/thoughts.
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Balance is okay but that would make our world monotonous at the some point.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful thought to ponder though
with all due respect, totomai, when i say 'balance' it is in the eyes of the 'tao' through the chaos the universe resides. 'monotony' is an oxymoron expression to 'chaos'...
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A beautifully rendered piece. Awesome writing!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of chaos bringing balance. Well written.
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