Sunday, July 19, 2015

bluebirds at dawn


in the dawn bluebirds sing

and the rain filled clouds afford

the day a full display of their

magic colored scarves with

the helping fingers of the sun

 

i know somewhere for some

this rainbow is not within view

but only the dark clouds and storms

and for them no bluebirds can be

heard, no dawning of a dream

 

i can only hope that the universe in its

chaos and tumult will bring balance

so that those in the dark will lay their heads

to sleep and someday they’ll awaken

to songbirds, witness a rainbow in the light

of dawn giving rest to the storm

 

19 comments:

  1. I think there is a certain balance to the universe. When I am having a bad day you may be having a good day, and vice versa. And hopefully through that we can help each other out. But there is something deeper as well - and injustice and inequality much greater with poverty, pain, war - but hopefully that too leads us to helping each other out - and not just ginoring it because it does not effect us.

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  2. Hmm. I like the imagery, especially that of the rainbow as a magic colored scarf! As for balance, I think there is. Can't see rainbows everywhere at the same time. It rains longer in some places. :)

    Btw, your link at the Pantry is broken. Do re-add. :)

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  3. May the helping fingers of the sun fling away the darkness and bring a bright smile to one and all...a beautiful prayer...

    Your link is not working @ PU, please check...

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  4. nature indeed displays moments of amazing harmony and balance.too bad we dont always get to emulate that in our lives.

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  5. Such a beautiful wish.......I love the whole idea of bluebirds in the dawn!

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  6. i thought this was a sweet and hopeful piece. well done. i'd love to wake up to bluebirds on my room's windowsill. that would be a fairy-tale come true!

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  7. This is wonderful! Loved the beautiful images in this piece :)

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  8. I always love the way you bring nature to life in your poetry.

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  9. Your third stanza really warms my heart.

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  10. I specially like the hope & light in the ending stanza ~ Wishing you good week ~

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  11. I do hope you will find some time to make some visits to others who have visited you this week. Smiles.

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  12. What beautiful images your hopeful heart creates!

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  13. I love the play with the song lyrics..i hope too for a brighter day..for all

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  14. Oh I do adore this poem...there is peace here, compassion, kindness and solace. Your prayer to the Universe is so beautiful....I especially loved the first stanza that took my breath away...

    'and the rain filled clouds afford

    the day a full display of their

    magic colored scarves with

    the helping fingers of the sun'

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  15. Balance is okay but that would make our world monotonous at the some point.

    A wonderful thought to ponder though

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    1. with all due respect, totomai, when i say 'balance' it is in the eyes of the 'tao' through the chaos the universe resides. 'monotony' is an oxymoron expression to 'chaos'...

      gracias for visiting

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  16. A beautifully rendered piece. Awesome writing!

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  17. I like the idea of chaos bringing balance. Well written.

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