Thursday, July 3, 2014

a fallen leaf


sometimes I feel like a fallen leaf
who has lost its verdant colour
and lies brown and dry rolling
about as the winds swishes

strange feet fling me about
sometimes I’m stepped on and
at the mercy of someone’s soul (sole)
they scrape me off sometimes
on a shaggy thingy in their home

they care less that at one time i
was fresh and a vibrant green
that kissed the canvas of the
azure sky for their eyes to behold

i would glitter in the morning
wearing my attire bought at the
store of morning’s dew reflecting
a rainbow of colors from the firry
yellow and the sun’s crimson hue

if only they’d remember how once
a hand leaned against my arboreal
abode whilst he leaned over to kiss
his lover as my cousin lay gently
like a ornament in her hair

or when my niece and nephews would
glide atop the tiny ripples in the stream
as it glistened down the bend humming
splashing o’er stones telling of their
journey of what it’s seen, where it’s been

sometimes I feel like that leaf that is
waving goodbye to its nest and haven
as it flits and flutters down, down
to be soon forgotten and kicked about
brown and dry, dry and brown

 


*for Poets United at midweek. like grace, no UFO stories but I am considered ‘alien’ in some circles. also, Grace’s, every day amazing, lovely reflection: midpoint, assessing my life
…the past falls away like brown dry leaves falling into summer downpour…


 

10 comments:

  1. Yes..the world can make you feel crumpled and crushed and fallen...hard at times to gather our strength and blossom again..wonderful imagery..like ageing bones.. the determined dry click of a clock passing time

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  2. My friend, such a reflective poem this is. I so know the feeling! I smiled at the "shaggy thingy"........I especially love the closing line. The reversal of the words really works. To us, however, you are far more than a dry brown leaf. Your poems swim with all the colors of the rainbow,,,,,,,,all the colors of your heart.

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    1. thank you Jae for visiting and sprinkling my leaves

      and you, mi amiga, you know we share a common thread, share a spool that is unwinding.

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  3. attire bought at the store of the morning dew...smiles...love me some nature so this is right up my alley...but i like the personal touch there in the end...feeling like that leaf...i think we can relate....smiles...well spun man

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  4. I wonder how many of us have that old dry leaf feeling--way after the midpoint, mind you.The odd thing about that old leaf is the many companions and huge family, all of whom have verdant memories and days despite what others see ... I like your poem and the two comments ahead of me, like that you took this prompt to reflect in. Is it the winds 5 wishes? or swishes? I would want to know the 5 wishes of the wind that pushes and pulls at me!

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  5. but even the downed leaves smell wonderfully of autumn as they slowly give back to the earth from which they came. :)

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  6. I am happy to read this my friend ~ Nowadays I feel that fallen leaf, wishing for those days when we are fresh and verdant green ~ But we have the best of both worlds, neither too young nor too old ~ I hate to say goodbye yet to the nest, you know ~ Not yet, smiles ~

    Wishing you lovely week ~

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  7. whether in the nest or out of it we are never short of experiences that really count...a lovely poem...

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  8. Oh, this is truly beautiful, Marcoantonio. You really have a sensitive heart, and it is always so visible in your poetry! Nice to see you here at PU.

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