Monday, June 9, 2014

honey in a gray day


the diurnal calm and then the peril
angst and pain then soothing in its wane
warming embraces makes feral the day
pushing toward the edge of insane

like stubbing a toe as most have done
we elevate it placing a bag of ice
the throbbing subsides but not before
spontaneous cursing comes once or thrice

the stubbing is a metaphor to the
challenges of the day that we face
but small in comparison to those
who must run in life’s real race

Pablo Neruda said ’…the journeys go and
come between honey and pain…’
but I’m reminded of those who
are condemned to days where never
is it sunny only the stormy rain

like the mother in Afghanistan
wailing out her cry of where she
had to barter her daughter for food
so her other children would not be
left unfed to die

of watching her husband’s beheading
the burning of their home the tearing
of her body in front of her son by Taliban
and raping of her daughter by more
than one

so in the challenging moments of the day
seemingly filling the sky in clouds of gray
think of the land where birds no longer sing
no longer fly, the only thing heard are
a wailing mother’s cry


 *written for Kerry O'Connor's challenge in Imaginary garden to
   a day of honey and not the sting

8 comments:

  1. It does come and go, and I tell my grandsons that when they are hurt, but I don't think anything could comfort the mother in Afghanistan.

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  2. Visceral, and it puts it all into perspective.

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  3. This does but things in perspective...the simply to the horrific! We need to be reminded~ Well done!

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  4. Your words help us see and remember that mother in Afghanistan, such hard lives that do put ours into perspective. Well done, my friend........

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  5. I am thrilled to know that this poem was inspired by the Neruda quote. You have explored some harsh realities here, with a lot of heart.

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  6. … puts it all in perspective - and the last lines are gorgeous. Heart wrenching, but gorgeous.

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  7. A mother's wailing cry, is the bitter end.

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