like the flower in Spring
petals in their brilliant colors
display. the leaves are a vibrant
green and loam at its rooted feet is
dark, from moist of morning’s dew
in Spring she used to be like this
when she’d look my way and would
on occasion seem to be fawning making
me feel like that flower of Spring
but Autumn comes, some call it Fall,
and colors change to crimson and
russet, although still brilliant in the
aesthetic way yet changing their colors,
a different beauty in their display
she sees me now in my Autumn attire,
knowing Spring still is her favorite color,
she looks no longer at me the way she used
to but now at another flower whose colors
to but now at another flower whose colors
of Spring catch her eyes
i am that flower your eyes no longer, of me, see
a sentient being with love in my heart and when
my Autumn colors now displayed, you look away
a sentient being with love in my heart and when
my Autumn colors now displayed, you look away
and so my petals droop, my leaves fall to my side,
the heaviness of falling dew, are my tears for you
the heaviness of falling dew, are my tears for you
How the natural world bears aging better than we do. What a poignantly beautiful poem this is M.A.
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful and tugs at the heartstrings...
ReplyDeleteSad – for in truth all seasons are beautiful, in people as in nature.
ReplyDeleteI know, mi amigos y amigas. wrote this in a moment when voices were silent and the heart sifting through feeling sad and alone
ReplyDeleteThis poem seems to cycle through the seasons like the feelings - at first soft and then like autumn shedding - like a kind of fall - a fall in spirit too.. i hope it lifts up soon
ReplyDeleteI personally prefer the vibrant colours of autumn. I know that change in the way one is perceived, when our spring colours fade and we begin to wrinkle with the autumn leaves.........but we hold buried treasure! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteLove should endure all seasons! Autumn is among the most beautiful seasons of all.
ReplyDeleteSo many beautiful words are formed around the coming of autumn... sometimes I think poetry is best written at times of change...
ReplyDeleteGreat capture. Autumn is a beautiful season.
ReplyDeleteAlways romantic and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteZQ
the bloom is off my rose as well, i'm afraid. :)
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