i walk
many a dawn until the dusk comes on
wondering
what path now my steps may take
and what
will these footings tell me
another
sunrise ascends into the day and
another
starry night and moon kissies mine eyes
aware that the translucence of light is now fuzzy
like light fusing through rain drops on eye lenses
objects
farther than an arms length away are opaque
but
still clearly i can hear the rustling about
as
squirrels and chipmunks chase one another
and
the robins, cardinals and sparrows sing to each other
and
the scent of the cherry blossoms, red and yellow roses,
conifers
and mint fill the air as my heart beats of joy
i sit
on a bench in the presence of Nature’s gift
next to the
love of my life as she holds my hand and although
without
knowing of wherefore my next step shall avail
i embrace this; a moment with breath
this is lovely.
ReplyDeletea beautiful poem with Natures delights...by the way, I think your link is not working @ Poets United Midweek Motif..you might try this link: http://nene-lifewhispers.blogspot.in/2015/05/a-moment-with-breath.html#comment-form
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DeleteTo walk so accompanied by all of nature and experience, to sit like so, next to the love of your life--this is how we honor life and faith and receive an equal blessing. I adore this poem. It works whether the "I" is the inner thought of yourself or the one you sit near--whether the "I" is me or not.
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely, peaceful poem, full of courage and acceptance of what is.
ReplyDeleteWhat trust is needed in order to put one foot in front of the other in blind faith of Life's Mystery is courageous and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely magnificent :D
ReplyDeleteThose moments are blessed...if only more people could just sit in peace ind be thankful for what they have..not what they haven't
ReplyDeleteOh so lovely - the scene painted so beautifully, the joyousness, and the hand holding. What could be more perfect than this moment?
ReplyDeletethe dusk, the starry night, the moon...you remind me of contemporary pablo neruda! this poem is a beautiful work of art.
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