Saturday, February 28, 2015

surrendering to February


i surrender
     to the warmth of your breath

          soothing the nape of my neck

your head resting atop my shoulder

     your soft breast lay on my chest

          and we share our dreams lying next to each other

 the cares of the world lost in our nocturnal nest

     and the music of the moon and stars

         make tender our embrace

as we render our hearts our souls

     into this slumber ridding ourselves of our yesterary
        
          on this memorable last day of February
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21 comments:

  1. TexWisGirlSaturday, February 28, 2015 at 7:29:00 AM PST

    very nice!

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  2. Sherry Blue SkySaturday, February 28, 2015 at 9:22:00 AM PST

    So beautiful. I can feel the cocoon of closeness and warmth against the outdoor chill.

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  3. Sumana RoySunday, March 1, 2015 at 12:33:00 AM PST

    you made us feel her too...beautiful words...

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  4. Vandana SharmaSunday, March 1, 2015 at 12:40:00 AM PST

    like a free flowing breeze.....................................

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  5. Old EggSunday, March 1, 2015 at 1:05:00 AM PST

    There is nothing like the feeling of the one you love laying across asleep sharing the same breath. Really beautiful.

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  6. Jae RoseSunday, March 1, 2015 at 2:13:00 AM PST

    A new month..a new day...a new morning...there are many opportunities to start afresh...a touching poem

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  7. brudbergSunday, March 1, 2015 at 3:35:00 AM PST

    Sharing that nocturnal togetherness is a great way to end the harshness of this winter month.

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSunday, March 1, 2015 at 3:52:00 AM PST

    Sounds good to me!

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  9. MarySunday, March 1, 2015 at 4:40:00 AM PST

    Yes - that is the way February should end. Bring on March! Smiles.

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  10. GraceSunday, March 1, 2015 at 4:40:00 AM PST

    A sweet ode to the last day of February ~ Like that warm nocturnal nest ~

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  11. GabriellaSunday, March 1, 2015 at 5:55:00 AM PST

    This is sweet and romantic. A perfect way to end one month and start a new one.

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  12. WolfsrosebudSunday, March 1, 2015 at 6:18:00 AM PST

    ... the good times prepares us for the trials

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  13. SusanSunday, March 1, 2015 at 8:08:00 AM PST

    Nice way to say goodbye to a rough month!

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  14. Donna@LivingFromHappinessSunday, March 1, 2015 at 9:24:00 AM PST

    It does feel like a goodbye as we hopefully move to a March goodbye....romantic and so appropriately so for the month of romance and love.

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  15. SuyashJSunday, March 1, 2015 at 9:56:00 AM PST

    very well composed!!

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  16. AnonymousSunday, March 1, 2015 at 10:57:00 AM PST

    you mean momentarily,

    amazing imagery....

    http://ihopsmithwalkingpath.blogspot.com/2015/03/haiku-and-poetry.html

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  17. PoppySunday, March 1, 2015 at 12:55:00 PM PST

    Such surrender is sweet and consoling, whispered softly, to listen for March.

    Poppy

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  18. TorieSunday, March 1, 2015 at 1:52:00 PM PST

    This is so romantic and lovely. Just so beautiful, Marcoantonio :)

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  19. totomaiSunday, March 1, 2015 at 2:24:00 PM PST

    very intimate. what a way to end February and I believe to start March :)

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  20. Eileen T O'Neill .....Monday, March 2, 2015 at 5:07:00 AM PST

    Marcoantonio,

    What a loving and placid ending to winter and February, at least in this poem. I would hate to disturb that scene of peacefulness!

    Eileen

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  21. Gen Giggles Monday, March 2, 2015 at 5:47:00 AM PST

    March came like a lamb this year but for many the lion was roaring quite loudly.

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