Friday, November 29, 2013

Angels in the snow


Oh, so fleeting are those days of yore
where lovers leaped without hands or feet
just their hearts

those moments when tears
would appear and with one gentle swipe
of tender fingers your lover would comfort
you and whisper ‘all will be ok’

quiet moments where two
souls would share a space and without
the misnomers from words being spoken
they would just embrace

when soaring figures made of clouds
passed by as we lay together in
fields we had played and giggle
when our empty bellies grumbled

we’d ride our bikes so fast
without fear laughing while pedaling
into the wind as leaves and particulars
gathered in the corner of our eyes
along with tiny tears

Oh, so fleeting were the times
where angst and wars and death
had no place in our immortal souls
we would just play making angels
in the snow

4 comments:

  1. This is beautiful and sad at the same time. The repetition at the beginning and end of the poem create a kind of "circle of life" feeling. Happy Holidays to you, mi amigo.

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  2. Yes, beautiful, sad, nostalgic........who knew how golden the memories of those "ordinary days" would one day become? Beautiful, my friend.

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  3. I agree so sad n' beautiful! I love the memories and the full circle feel....the dance of nature and the riding the bikes...so wonderful!
    I can see it...I envy this tenderness-you express it so well!
    Beautiful! I hope you and yours had a lovely holiday~

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