Sunday, January 17, 2016

you and me


when i asked if you would kiss me
it was not upon my brow or cheek
but on my lips where i am most
sensitive and where that kiss belongs
of you and me

when i asked if you loved me
it was not about how i walked
or ran or how i looked when clean
and groomed but of the heart belonging
of you and me

and when i asked of when i’m gone
will you in spirit hold my hand and kiss
my picture on your mantle, will you
remember that warm embrace
of you and me
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21 comments:

  1. Jae RoseSunday, January 17, 2016 at 2:45:00 AM PST

    A touching poem..and a reminder that true love is about what is inside ourselves and the connection made between our souls

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  2. AnonymousSunday, January 17, 2016 at 3:49:00 AM PST

    One always hopes that one is remembered with love... even as a faint memory that brings a smile.

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  3. brudbergSunday, January 17, 2016 at 4:01:00 AM PST

    The warmth of a kiss will always linger... I hope,

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  4. Sanaa RizviSunday, January 17, 2016 at 4:43:00 AM PST

    Such a lovely poem :)

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  5. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)Sunday, January 17, 2016 at 5:33:00 AM PST

    Ahhhh - this one reached and squeezed my heart ❤️❤️

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  6. MarySunday, January 17, 2016 at 6:11:00 AM PST

    We all hope that there will be someone in our life who will answer YES to that last last question. Your poems so often have such warmth, Marcoantonio. This is no exception.

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  7. Donna@LivingFromHappinessSunday, January 17, 2016 at 8:50:00 AM PST

    Oh I so adored this beautiful poem of you and me....and finding that person we can answer yes to is finding bliss...a soulmate!

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  8. Gazal BharadwajSunday, January 17, 2016 at 9:07:00 AM PST

    Ah it takes the heart away...

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  9. C.C.Sunday, January 17, 2016 at 9:30:00 AM PST

    A reminder of the things that are really important in the end.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkySunday, January 17, 2016 at 9:46:00 AM PST

    I love this - it is about the "being" , for sure. Very moving, my friend.

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  11. SuyashJSunday, January 17, 2016 at 10:15:00 AM PST

    sweet poem you got here !

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  12. Donna Jo WallaceSunday, January 17, 2016 at 11:45:00 AM PST

    So romantic. A beautiful view of love in many phases.

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  13. Gillena CoxSunday, January 17, 2016 at 12:39:00 PM PST

    ah yes love is many faceted

    Happy Sunday

    much love...

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  14. Nicholas Sunday, January 17, 2016 at 1:28:00 PM PST

    Hi MarcoAntonio, this was a ballad totally. I love how it wants to be a song. I can feel the melody to this. good write!

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  15. Purba chakrabortySunday, January 17, 2016 at 1:28:00 PM PST

    I am touched. Very heartwarming poem :)

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  16. tonispencerSunday, January 17, 2016 at 3:48:00 PM PST

    Such a warm poem. Indeed, love is about what is inside us that lasts forever and two hundred years longer than that. The physical and spiritual warmth between two people who love in that special way. Spencer is Kanzensakura

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  17. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSunday, January 17, 2016 at 5:48:00 PM PST

    Sweetly written.

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  18. AnonymousSunday, January 17, 2016 at 7:48:00 PM PST

    A deeply moving write. I agree with James, it is definitely singing a song,

    Elizabeth

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  19. Sumana RoySunday, January 17, 2016 at 9:24:00 PM PST

    there's a touch of warmth of deep love in these beautiful words...

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  20. Wendy BourkeMonday, January 18, 2016 at 4:46:00 PM PST

    This is beautiful. There is a vulnerability here, that is so tenderly expressed, one almost feels as if they have intruded on something lovely and fragile. Very moving.

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  21. Stacy M.S.Monday, January 18, 2016 at 9:33:00 PM PST

    this is a beautiful. very romantic and pure.

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