Wednesday, December 9, 2015

the dance


love inside me sometimes feels
i have more within than most
as the stars they wink and the
moon smiles just for me  

the crimson light at dusk
of the days’ sun, so too, waves
in its departure as if familiar  
while displaying a veil of gold
onto curdled cotton figures
soaring across the sky azure

a wind gusts friendly, lifting
skirts of trees as they sway
whilst my feathered friends
hang on to barren arboreal tips
whistling for my ears to hear

soon the autumn’s russet dress
around its shoulders wear
a shawl knit of white,
a cold vapors breath
moon beams make glisten
the winter’s night and the gray
shadows ask to join me in the dance

19 comments:

  1. There is majesty and magic in this wonderful poem - finding comfort in the cold and being open enough to dance with it...

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  2. Love bursts out of the first stanza of this poem, Marcoantonio.
    I really like the picture of winter in the final stanza...a nice 'dance' with words!

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  3. Nature draping her in various colors offering a dance...love it...

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  4. Beautiful and inviting! My favorite image:
    "a wind gusts friendly, lifting
    skirts of trees as they sway"
    but I love the entire tome of the piece where so much grandeur makes some stillness seem "curdled" rather than whole. Love!

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  5. "ask me to join them in the dance"....and the reader is transported along with you, through the beauty of your words.

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  6. Nature, no matter the season, colors us with her ever changing hues. Wonderful write,

    Elizabeth

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  7. Great idea that this is all a dance. Nature constantly moving, and you with it.

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  8. Oh wonderful to dance in the cold with birds who sing regardless of the season. So much magic in this, just a majestic tenderness.

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  9. What a glorious poem this is giving voice and feeling to the whole world around us. Magnificent!

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  10. What a beautiful scene you paint with words. It creates a magical feeling, yet one that we're all familiar with.

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  11. bravo! it is a dance of the color crimson! lovely!

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  12. these are my favourite lines

    "onto curdled cotton figurines
    soaring across the sky, azure "

    much love...

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  13. Nice expression of feelings and emotions absorbed in bright as well as in grey colors too. True feeling of life balance.

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  14. Nature's ever changing colours are majestic...always...:-) A great poem..loved it to the core... :-)

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  15. wonderful imagery of the blessings all around us. merry christmas to you and yours.

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  16. I like the dance with winter's knit of white ~ Still now snow here but hoping there's some in the coming weeks ~

    Hope you are well Marco ~ Have a blessed Holiday ~

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  17. I like the dance with winter's knit of white ~ Still now snow here but hoping there's some in the coming weeks ~

    Hope you are well Marco ~ Have a blessed Holiday ~

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