i wish
to talk to you about your imposition
you knocked
upon my door when first i was bornand then when life was hard and much a burden
you teased me, enticed me with a supposed calm,
you said you'd end my anguish, my pain and my tears
when light
appeared you would cloak me in your darkness
and as
i walked upon a path of prickly pebbles remindingme of the diurnal verve of life you’d place a shard of jagged
stone underneath my tender naked feet to remind me
of whence the light evinces that your dark so too resides
and
when the wraps of Love did embrace me after so long
a query…" could i ever be afforded the wealth of such,could my days and nights of longing be sated by its touch"
and so thus when its warmth finally availed my arms, my
finger tips, you came and stole it, ripped it from my heart
you’ve
tattered my spirit upended my soul
and
have raped me of the nature of my being not allowing me either to quench my thirst or fill
my belly with the pleasures abided in this mundane abode
with your tugs and tows you tear apart my heart and soul
but to
this end i do not fail to tell you
that
until my destiny is fulfilled, telling of the Lovei feel and shields me from your unrelenting pull
the life within me shall not to your will descend
await your turn, be gone be gone, death be gone
Wow, my friend........may it wait a very long time, indeed, still so much loving to be done. This is beautifully written, the journey is fraught with sharp stones and struggle and tears but, oh, such a wonderful journey, nevertheless.
ReplyDeletelove the challenging lines..
ReplyDeleteSometimes we have to fight for our lives - from the second we are born to the day we depart..no matter how dark we must indeed always fight and i love how you have conveyed this in your poem
ReplyDeletei liked how you put up a good fight.
ReplyDeletevery intense and raw..love it.
ReplyDeleteYour personification of death was very intriguing and skillfully rendered. Awesome writing.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Wendy, a great personification.
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