Thursday, August 27, 2015

halleluiah, life


in the dawn the flair of sunlight rises
and the choir of birds sing ‘halleluiah’
to the beginning of our new day
and that life is precious in each and
everyone’s own way

oh light of the universe, oh light of joy
bring forth this day’s abundance where
hands join and smiles evince in place of the
folded fist over the sadness and tears
over the hate and wars and heart scorned fears

rid from the minds of those where anger resides
destructive manners preside because they think
this, the only way they will survive, not knowing
that even in the marsh deep in forests, gather
species of all kinds and live in peace amongst each other

we must put our weapons down for they only
bring sadness and tears, they take away the
blossoming of life where love shares the space
and in due time the hand intertwined in another
will replace the clenched fist, the killing gun,
and we’ll grow old rejoicing that ‘life’ won

10 comments:

  1. How I love this! The creatures in the forest living harmoniously.....and the clasped hands replacing the hands holding guns.........I love your closing line especially. Wonderfully written, my friend, with such an uplifting message.

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  2. oh light of the universe, oh light of joy - I agree, this reads like a beautiful prayer ~

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  3. This reads very nicely as a psalm. Your hope for a better world comes through. Considering we just had a shooting here this week, I would hope that anger could be rid of the minds of those that need it - and that we could find and end to senseless violence.

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  4. i know this sounds like a prayer or psalm but that connotes an intention for the devine or a deity but i speak for our ears in the reality of this world to hear. we, humans, must open our clenched fist, abandon our guns. we must be responsible for ourselves. a deity, cannot help us with this

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  5. Your positive spirit shines brilliantly in this poem...what a joy to read!

    I love this:

    " life is precious in each and
    everyone’s own way

    oh light of the universe, oh light of joy"

    So empowering!

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