Saturday, December 27, 2014

dark or light


dark , dark ~ black

        surrounds

                  i let it embrace me

                       in this empty space the absence of color
 
             a void without light

                         no longer with fear

portentous disappears

                  thoughts scramble, jumbled

                             breath is shallow, quiet

                                          heart beat slow
    tears appear and flow

                          days bygones

         saddened memories

                  loves lost to the absence of life

                           and so i sit here  

                                 wondering why the past came so quickly

           soon my tomorrows                          will disappear
 
                              is there light

or dark dark
                                        where i will be ?

3 comments:

  1. There will be light, my friend, and Mamasita will be there. This year, more than any other, I have reflected on those missing, how fast the years go, and that one of these Christmases I will be missing too. Sigh. It goes so fast.

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  2. I felt like this touched base on the theme of life after death a little bit because of the hard contrasting words between "light" and "dark." Of course this could be left to further interpretation, but this was an excellent portrayal of that theme. Great work! :)

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