we are groveling to find the
makeup
of our nature, to understand our blindness, our insensitivities
we stand and shout words
of ignorance so that we can’t hear
truth in the winds of yesteryear
and those that now swirl about
in our midst
we dare not claim ourselves
as the sculptors of this
dying earthalthough we are the scepter holders
nor are we to blame for the skies
having darken before the day turns
to night and the rivers no longer the
springs that once sate life’s thirst,
the oceans where terrestrials gestated
are now but a death knell to the life
born to breathe its waters and soar
within its waves as birds do through
the clouds in the sky
we don’t wish to look into
the reflection
before us as it depicts the
uncaring demonwe so fear in our religiosity and not of
the god-like image we were to be
thus we choose to create a nihilistic destiny
of blind uncaring destruction, of that
reflection we so not want to be and so
as indeterminist beings we are free to choose
a spirit of life to perpetuity where love
is its wrappings or do we continue in the
demons path of uncaring destruction
you of bone, flesh and blood,
of sea water
of earth, of air, of fire, I cry
for you but more so I cryfor our children and theirs who may never see a tree
sway in the wind, an elephant blow its trumpet,
a lion roar, a dolphin chirp, the whale blow its hole,
the eagle soar onto its aerie or hear the wolf howl
its lamenting cries for the human souls that so
wantonly were forced to fly like birds in the sky
*dedicated to the HK17 298 souls
Marco, this is brilliant, one of your best and deepest, a cry of pain for the earth and its creatures. I love "we dare not claim ourselves
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when we were the scepter holders" very much. And then your entire closing stanza just hits the heart with pain, agreement, and grief - the images you offer, that future generations may never see - a tragedy of human folly and greed - just devastating.
gracias mi amiga. hope you're doing ok
ReplyDeleteI have never read such an elegant and truthful peace. I find I agree but did not have the talent nor the thought to write this.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely the best poem I had read in weeks...months.
"I cry for you but more so I cry
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sway in the wind, an elephant blow its trumpet,
a lion roar, a dolphin chirp, the whale blow its hole,
the eagle soar onto its aerie or hear the wolf howl" so sorrowful, tragic, scary
Nicely written, Marco. Those souls sure don't fly like eagles, they fall to earth. Not that they ever thought of imitating those eagles. I liked the 3rd verse best, I call it the evil demon verse.
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Humans can be such a terrible species. So many don't think about anything but their own gain. They never consider future generations or the other creatures which share the planet with us. You have captured these sad truths beautifully and eloquently.
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holy cow, this is so powerful. i'd like to hear you read it... i feel like it should be bellowed from a high place for all of us to hear and reflect.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely brilliant writing, and it is a perspective that I subscribe to wholeheartedly.
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