A single waxen figure
with molten base sits on a sillreflection on the window pane
a tiny flame flickers in the dark of night
it waggles in a breeze that
has found an unseen cranny
between drywall and wooden frame
casting flailing shadows on the wall
that promenade as day light fallsand dances amidst the stars of night
with the tempo from the candle light
a flaming arrow pierces
the black of sky as all sits stilland the eyes of nature
watches it race by
the solace and the solitude
gives rise to an emptiness ofa cold and vacuous night when
there's absence of a heart in
a living body or presence
of no soul
You've created such a cold, stark feeling with this. BRRRRR....
ReplyDeleteThe absence of the heart is piercing but these lines are lovely:
ReplyDeletea flaming arrow pierces
the black of sky as all sits still
and the eyes of nature
watches it race by
i liked the flaming arrow part best, too!
ReplyDeleteThe mood in this piece is deeply felt by the reader. I find your closing stanza especially moving.
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