listen
in the dark
the
sounds of the dayhave gone astray
but the noise still resides
you
can hear the days voices
the
sound of treescrackling in the cold
the wind playing
whistling in its space
stand
in the dark and
let
the smells of the daythe melting of snow on grass
and your wet flannel shirt
your
eyes needn’t be closed
you
can see the gray of skytiny green of thriving buds
on trees and the crimson russet
leaves fallen piercing through
the white of snow on the ground
in
the dark I can hear her heart
beat
to the rhythm when shestands beside me closely, feel her
femininity, smell her freshly washed hair
and if i’m lucky, i can see the
flickering of stars not by peering upward
but into the reflection of her eyes
if you listen in the dark
you
can re-live the day
beautiful. i'm liking your uplifting poetry. :)
ReplyDeletegracias mi amiga.
ReplyDeleteSo incredibly beautiful. Especially seeing the stars in her eyes. Your wife is a well loved woman!!!!
ReplyDeletegracias, mi amiga. you know about that reflection in the eyes. most are luckier than others. have a wonderful weekend
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have described your scenes by relying on sensory images. It all came very much alive for me as I read the poem.
ReplyDeleteI especially love the way to see the stars in your lovers eyes.. so important when they are shrouded in clouds up above.
ReplyDeleteI actually like gray days. Being someone who lives with a mood disorder, the gray sky says to me "it's okay to be the way you are."
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem, very soothing.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/11/the-flower-of-my-love.html
Right around that flannel shirt this poem came alive for me and I loved each sensual detail. The shirt is a surprise that works like a hook. Very unique.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteI've had a really crap day but you're making me rethink it . . . thank you.
ReplyDeleteHow lovely...a heart song I needed to read
ReplyDeleteThe sun of nature in winter. What a lovely sound!
ReplyDeleteso calm and pretty. love your song for the winter.
ReplyDeletealso am loving your new blog layout. very nice!