tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post7832057126035168317..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: now softly i stepMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-38398143157807241622015-01-19T09:08:47.590-08:002015-01-19T09:08:47.590-08:00very reflective piece.
reminds me that as i get o...very reflective piece.<br /><br />reminds me that as i get older, i become more gentle, slower, think more deeply.<br /><br />i think our minds grow just as our physical bodies do.<br /><br />love this!Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-41989368435991484092015-01-18T17:55:16.245-08:002015-01-18T17:55:16.245-08:00"lie here in the slumber
of the ritual called..."lie here in the slumber<br />of the ritual called sleep and play in <br />the other reality of dreams"<br /><br />This resonates for me. Excellent poem all together!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-21431506182347887802015-01-16T16:38:22.377-08:002015-01-16T16:38:22.377-08:00Wonderful, simply wonderful.Wonderful, simply wonderful.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-57193210592930728222015-01-16T16:30:44.147-08:002015-01-16T16:30:44.147-08:00Oh what beautiful words to inspire the dreamer to ...Oh what beautiful words to inspire the dreamer to rise and enjoy this day's dawn.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-88414767110460824112015-01-16T03:21:40.846-08:002015-01-16T03:21:40.846-08:00How I loved "The seductive sprinkle of dawn.....How I loved "The seductive sprinkle of dawn..." when each of us should thank our lucky stars that we have another day to live, to achieve, to love.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-3247966341467548352015-01-16T02:36:23.885-08:002015-01-16T02:36:23.885-08:00I agree with everyone. This is a beautiful poem. T...I agree with everyone. This is a beautiful poem. There is a sort of resignation and acceptance of what really matters...an appreciation of the simple things....an appreciation of being alive. Very insightful and sensitive.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-8828397794603688032015-01-15T15:05:49.584-08:002015-01-15T15:05:49.584-08:00Oh how I love this. One of your best, Marco - so s...Oh how I love this. One of your best, Marco - so soft and lovely and appreciative of beauty everywhere. Simply wonderful to read. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-29114084787641040812015-01-15T11:07:34.772-08:002015-01-15T11:07:34.772-08:00I sense the effort of keeping trying...getting out...I sense the effort of keeping trying...getting out of bed and doing what we must...soft steps may well be sure steps forward Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-23489387343394872882015-01-15T10:52:25.010-08:002015-01-15T10:52:25.010-08:00There is so much imagery and wonderful aspects of ...There is so much imagery and wonderful aspects of living in this poem. I really appreciated reading this because of the honesty and integrity of it all. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-36725242183422260922015-01-15T10:00:29.929-08:002015-01-15T10:00:29.929-08:00The wisdom of aging, knowing the 'small joys&#...The wisdom of aging, knowing the 'small joys', enjoying the time, playing with dreams, and finally moving forward with human responsibilities for our family/friends/ourselves we all bear here at the earth - thanks for sharing humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-32730878716142959292015-01-15T09:01:17.228-08:002015-01-15T09:01:17.228-08:00i can relate to a lot of this - mellowing out as i...i can relate to a lot of this - mellowing out as i age, sometimes just not wanting to get out of bed, but still enjoying so much around me when i do!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-49200947231307127762015-01-15T08:20:53.825-08:002015-01-15T08:20:53.825-08:00Softer steps, seemingly smaller joys--but as you d...Softer steps, seemingly smaller joys--but as you describe them these every day, any day, un-birthday pieces loom large on a landscape of family and friends.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com