tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post7742918056651818948..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: sun shadowMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-77137170010395915652016-03-20T19:30:36.770-07:002016-03-20T19:30:36.770-07:00This poem is written with such deep emotion and ex...This poem is written with such deep emotion and expresses both grief yet an understanding of life with all its joys and sadness.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-53746562523667867662016-03-20T16:00:40.493-07:002016-03-20T16:00:40.493-07:00Those first three lines are epic....so sweeping an...Those first three lines are epic....so sweeping and grand and just emotionally stunning :-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-7564274534856869742016-03-20T14:21:31.732-07:002016-03-20T14:21:31.732-07:00Marco...this is truly stunning! A new favorite for...Marco...this is truly stunning! A new favorite for me of your poetry!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-81745410974556344942016-03-20T13:50:18.810-07:002016-03-20T13:50:18.810-07:00Excellent Write!
ZQExcellent Write!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-52482423051754049712016-03-20T11:11:36.596-07:002016-03-20T11:11:36.596-07:00To be there shadowed... so often it happens, and t...To be there shadowed... so often it happens, and to be without a father's love... (or shown a father's love which is just as bad).. touched me deeply my friend.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-50911713311277268392016-03-20T10:24:16.509-07:002016-03-20T10:24:16.509-07:00Poor Diogenes...not only did they stand in the way...Poor Diogenes...not only did they stand in the way of his sun, they stole his lamp when he was searching for an honest man:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-83497081989830805862016-03-20T09:36:24.950-07:002016-03-20T09:36:24.950-07:00Indeed- don't: 'stand in the way of the su...Indeed- don't: 'stand in the way of the sun..." A very knowing write MarcoAntonio - it certainly spoke to me... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-78994753685300192252016-03-20T09:23:00.693-07:002016-03-20T09:23:00.693-07:00"Not to stand in the way of the sun.' How..."Not to stand in the way of the sun.' How beautiful. I could feel the joy and freedom of childhood in your words.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-51999983223257892502016-03-20T08:03:57.601-07:002016-03-20T08:03:57.601-07:00Oh Marco this poem has made tears well up in my ey...Oh Marco this poem has made tears well up in my eyes....I could feel the beauty of the words....<br /><br />'and there was joy in the freedom of the wind that<br />filled my lungs as i would run like a deer in its meadow<br />and the angst of life had not yet laid its heavy arm upon'<br /><br />And the underlying pain in the second stanza....and such hope in those brilliant ending words. Fabulous!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-72172529263844766402016-03-20T07:46:53.176-07:002016-03-20T07:46:53.176-07:00One should not always walk in the shadows! Your po...One should not always walk in the shadows! Your poem is very touching, with a wonderful selection of words for the bibliophile.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-53249086453749412842016-03-20T06:46:19.607-07:002016-03-20T06:46:19.607-07:00Splendid write :)Splendid write :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-66631635876471152522016-03-20T05:06:07.564-07:002016-03-20T05:06:07.564-07:00ah yes ageing is and un or happily so a part of th...ah yes ageing is and un or happily so a part of this process called life<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-73872057273655240702016-03-13T16:18:33.977-07:002016-03-13T16:18:33.977-07:00This is beautiful and poignant, Marco....the void ...This is beautiful and poignant, Marco....the void of a father's love and the heavy arm of the angst of life on your shoulder. Your closing line is especially effective.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com