tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post4635527553791953146..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: a storm withinMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-90474208446975475272014-10-14T17:51:42.375-07:002014-10-14T17:51:42.375-07:00I specially like your description of the storm as ...I specially like your description of the storm as jagged spear ~ That man is anomaly gives me food for thought ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-24174942403691404082014-10-14T11:38:34.401-07:002014-10-14T11:38:34.401-07:00" . . . the whitest of light traverses
like a..." . . . the whitest of light traverses<br />like a spiders web throughout the whole<br />expanse of the sky . . ." WOW!<br /><br />With the storm outside and inm, we are trapped in a web of our own making. Strong images.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-47759863978340022222014-10-14T10:53:11.064-07:002014-10-14T10:53:11.064-07:00Oh, the times when we realize the huge connection ...Oh, the times when we realize the huge connection between us and the natural world. It's amazing how we fight and Mother Nature fights and the struggle is endless. Still, any chance I get to put my toes in the sand, I do find my inner voice is quiet and I can really listen.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-23055365624617594972014-10-13T15:59:29.634-07:002014-10-13T15:59:29.634-07:00Dark and dangerous imagery here. You really evoke ...Dark and dangerous imagery here. You really evoke the powerful forces of both mother nature and human nature.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-7052940087596728212014-10-13T14:26:10.488-07:002014-10-13T14:26:10.488-07:00Wonderful imagery at the start… we do make a mess ...Wonderful imagery at the start… we do make a mess of things don't we.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-66234287246572890312014-10-13T11:40:10.556-07:002014-10-13T11:40:10.556-07:00A powerful write, especially about the mutated gen...A powerful write, especially about the mutated gene known as man. I love the image of the white light like a spider's web, crossing the heavens. Great writing, my friend.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-50944102823517104692014-10-13T10:18:41.950-07:002014-10-13T10:18:41.950-07:00Today, I decided to focus on individual lines whil...Today, I decided to focus on individual lines while reading... "the sand is a cold wet between my toes" might be the most vivid line I've read today. It fills me with memories of my own, it's very descriptive, and it makes me want to find a warm place for the speaker... Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-7687206498785091012014-10-13T09:13:21.904-07:002014-10-13T09:13:21.904-07:00an impressive write ... free flowing and powerful ...an impressive write ... free flowing and powerful ... ah the subject, odd creatures that we are with our consciousness of self and huge ego --- a flash of ligthning and voila through the eons life ... and we are just a comma in the long document ... among so many life forms we think we are unique ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-46866982828419307792014-10-13T05:17:11.292-07:002014-10-13T05:17:11.292-07:00The fact the man is the anomaly has been clear for...The fact the man is the anomaly has been clear for quite some time.. in a million year from now there will be nothing left... nature will somehow win in the end.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-52671367996728858022014-10-13T02:14:17.997-07:002014-10-13T02:14:17.997-07:00Loved this...
The flow and the description!Loved this...<br />The flow and the description!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-7162615464445892522014-10-13T01:55:50.277-07:002014-10-13T01:55:50.277-07:00Nature always wins out in the end--sometimes it ta...Nature always wins out in the end--sometimes it takes a while, but she will always reclaim what was hers.<br />I love the power of this poem, and the questions raised in the final verse about why and how our messed up species came to be here.<br /><br />http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/octpowrimo-2014-day-13.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12468694259907774673noreply@blogger.com