tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post3214219092063984452..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: Lost in the VastnessMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-63334971807517440722013-06-30T04:32:44.531-07:002013-06-30T04:32:44.531-07:00Wow, this expresses so well the big dreams and inn...Wow, this expresses so well the big dreams and innocent self-importance of childhood giving way to the reality of adulthood. Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-47038909310474664642013-06-29T02:54:47.609-07:002013-06-29T02:54:47.609-07:00"till I lay my head
on the beach to
sleep&quo..."till I lay my head<br />on the beach to<br />sleep"<br />That struggle can be exhausting at times!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-6094592051471409462013-06-28T20:18:50.035-07:002013-06-28T20:18:50.035-07:00Great use of metaphor, as we move through life we ...Great use of metaphor, as we move through life we can either be overwhelmed or opened to the new, but it can be exhausting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14088023144163691307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-19368056839390146192013-06-28T19:28:38.244-07:002013-06-28T19:28:38.244-07:00Touches me at the moment - very much feel like I a...Touches me at the moment - very much feel like I am floudering in the sea of life. Nicely captured.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-4601200546108648082013-06-28T14:35:26.434-07:002013-06-28T14:35:26.434-07:00Life has a way of swallowing us or making us fearf...Life has a way of swallowing us or making us fearful when we move beyond our little secluded space...beautifully written.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-39992401551663049592013-06-28T14:14:30.019-07:002013-06-28T14:14:30.019-07:00"I was small in its vastness
naked and bare
I..."I was small in its vastness<br />naked and bare<br />I had lost my identity"<br /><br />I like that a lot.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-24279505380295220122013-06-28T11:00:52.226-07:002013-06-28T11:00:52.226-07:00I especially love your description of swimming in ...I especially love your description of swimming in the lake. Perfect metaphor for life as children, then adults. I know being an adult has sure tuckered ME out! Smiles. Good one, my friend.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-77545651462433765302013-06-28T10:55:35.803-07:002013-06-28T10:55:35.803-07:00I don't think I have ever seen a better take o...I don't think I have ever seen a better take on "the little fish in the big blue sea." Thanks for posting and viva laIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-90944771148452466412013-06-28T09:37:59.075-07:002013-06-28T09:37:59.075-07:00Gracias mi amigas. I know many times our voices, o...Gracias mi amigas. I know many times our voices, our words, mirror each others. We just use different words different ways of expressing universal commonalities.Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-37146053755838412172013-06-28T09:13:37.946-07:002013-06-28T09:13:37.946-07:00Oh, I just love the extended metaphor that you'...Oh, I just love the extended metaphor that you've explored here. This poem speaks clearly and resonates on many levels with me. Thank you. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-76967542518032009812013-06-28T08:14:53.660-07:002013-06-28T08:14:53.660-07:00nice perspective.nice perspective.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-2897087795770852782013-06-28T06:49:43.619-07:002013-06-28T06:49:43.619-07:00Such a universal experience you write about here. ...Such a universal experience you write about here. I can relate to the feeling of being overwhelmed and insufficient when we leave our own little worlds and venture out to something bigger. Sometimes I like being a big fish in a small pond better!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.com