tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post1894101714842571958..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: life's amissMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-91739605819115068482014-05-07T11:02:25.434-07:002014-05-07T11:02:25.434-07:00gracias for visiting mi amigosgracias for visiting mi amigosMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-70554132902856902612014-05-06T11:16:10.711-07:002014-05-06T11:16:10.711-07:00we are all just passing through ~we are all just passing through ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-16034037782484858162014-05-04T15:04:04.266-07:002014-05-04T15:04:04.266-07:00Yes, may the doves bring some joy in her sadness. ...Yes, may the doves bring some joy in her sadness. Beautiful write!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-72852205653175075282014-05-03T18:56:38.657-07:002014-05-03T18:56:38.657-07:00I feel sad for her but hope that the doves cooing ...I feel sad for her but hope that the doves cooing are comforting to her ~ Good one, I felt this one too ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-72920034951279861892014-05-03T05:38:42.254-07:002014-05-03T05:38:42.254-07:00This is comforting, joyful and somber...really wel...This is comforting, joyful and somber...really well balanced. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-4118947917026046022014-05-03T05:32:51.445-07:002014-05-03T05:32:51.445-07:00The intensity of isolation and loneliness in this ...The intensity of isolation and loneliness in this piece are heavy, felt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-26596135888631050642014-05-03T03:58:43.745-07:002014-05-03T03:58:43.745-07:00gracias to all of you lovers of moments and words....gracias to all of you lovers of moments and words. gracias for leaving a piece of youMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-13382088751131073482014-05-03T00:40:17.112-07:002014-05-03T00:40:17.112-07:00Very nicely put! Enjoyed the readVery nicely put! Enjoyed the readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-69147549102742595432014-05-02T11:57:30.620-07:002014-05-02T11:57:30.620-07:00This is a void filler....wow, it has a great prese...This is a void filler....wow, it has a great presence and tone, it hangs in the air like a wet fog with the promise of hope when the sun burns it off. Great take on this prompt, and great writing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-36744151762593054962014-05-02T11:18:20.745-07:002014-05-02T11:18:20.745-07:00Just passing through .. your poem is like a vast m...Just passing through .. your poem is like a vast mirror. That is not a bad ending, food and someone to share it with.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-15258138232589932042014-05-02T09:10:36.874-07:002014-05-02T09:10:36.874-07:00
this is beautiful...and sad...<br />this is beautiful...and sad...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-14847410098144185822014-05-02T06:49:39.336-07:002014-05-02T06:49:39.336-07:00I think this is the perfect vignette! You give us ...I think this is the perfect vignette! You give us a sense of the woman, yet leave some blurred edges indistinct and the setting becomes an integral part of the portrait.<br /><br />Very well done.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-7459583159634002592014-05-02T05:15:58.680-07:002014-05-02T05:15:58.680-07:00Beautifully sad. xBeautifully sad. xKathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-6753670700956320202014-05-01T10:03:04.397-07:002014-05-01T10:03:04.397-07:00so lovely and sad, too.so lovely and sad, too.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-67825858104402844922014-05-01T08:30:07.341-07:002014-05-01T08:30:07.341-07:00This is poignant and very lovely, my friend. I can...This is poignant and very lovely, my friend. I can see her. In fact, in some ways, I feel like I AM her this morning!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com