tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post1612979508962221279..comments2024-02-15T09:32:45.091-08:00Comments on life whispers: reflection of beautyMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-10433226320364935192014-07-31T02:10:06.674-07:002014-07-31T02:10:06.674-07:00Lovely write. Wish it were true. Wish we could all...Lovely write. Wish it were true. Wish we could all open our blinds again.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-19279770685610373752014-07-30T20:46:31.275-07:002014-07-30T20:46:31.275-07:00The journey to self acceptance isn't an easy o...The journey to self acceptance isn't an easy one...I love too you showed throughout the piece this precious beauty was healed.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-474493728115753222014-07-30T08:51:55.022-07:002014-07-30T08:51:55.022-07:00That last line was surprising, even when I realize...That last line was surprising, even when I realized the metaphor! But all the way through you showed us her healed, so the destroyed self became only a story--a very neat technique, and one I haven't seen often in poetry.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-17791402146926919072014-07-30T06:33:42.766-07:002014-07-30T06:33:42.766-07:00I think you have described the worst kind of alien...I think you have described the worst kind of alienation a person can experience - feelings of unworthiness and rejection.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-40336052888343414322014-07-30T04:41:47.591-07:002014-07-30T04:41:47.591-07:00When we can see ourselves as beautiful, others can...When we can see ourselves as beautiful, others can also. This was a great poem, nene!lolamousehttp://lolamousedroppings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-65752325782845220702014-07-30T04:25:46.381-07:002014-07-30T04:25:46.381-07:00how utterly cute this was... you sound beautiful!!...how utterly cute this was... you sound beautiful!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-31896397579067962912014-07-29T13:27:23.731-07:002014-07-29T13:27:23.731-07:00This is very cool. You got into a woman's head...This is very cool. You got into a woman's head and experience very well. I love the ending.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-87610626825119748842014-07-29T09:18:53.543-07:002014-07-29T09:18:53.543-07:00Sweet!Sweet!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4539648450943682539.post-65313212728678547082014-07-29T07:59:00.521-07:002014-07-29T07:59:00.521-07:00if we could all accept ourselves like this.if we could all accept ourselves like this.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com